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beloved_writerLv113yr
2021-09-18 05:47

I think the way you narrate your story and the word choice you use is very beautiful. From the very first section, I was captivated. As you mentioned in your synopsis, your work is poetic. However, I do wish some of the paragraphs were broken up into smaller ones 😅. It can get quite overwhelming reading such a large blurb of words. But overall, I’m enjoying this piece!

The History of the Human Heart

PrugnaKerai
4.9
9 Chs

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PrugnaKerai
PrugnaKeraiLv2

Thank you for your review and honesty! The chapter's being too long is up to individual preference, in a normal hand-held book my chapter lengths are more than adequate, however, I can understand that through a screen it does appear different. Thanks once again :)

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Riico_Gami
Riico_GamiLv1

Absolutely brilliant. Writing was so smooth and touched my heart. The story of Ehkadasi was beautiful. Amazing work Prugna. Can't wait for the next one.

3yr

Nimisha_Noby
Nimisha_NobyLv1

You write so beautifully! The story flowed so well and I loved being able to read the different perspectives. Overall, a wonderful story all round.

3yr
Vinay_Vekaria
Vinay_VekariaLv1

Prugna is an absolute wordsmith. She knows what to say, how to say it, and how to best get her point across. Loved every bit of it! Her philosophical analysis of the human condition was both insightful and utterly captivating!

3yr
kuhaku_sora
kuhaku_soraLv3

Wow! This is such a beautiful novel! I was completely immersed inside the story. Now, I find myself reading the succeeding chapters non-stop, so I hope you readers read this too! Such an amazing story!

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SEP1A
SEP1ALv10

As the tides rise and fall, one's life does the same. This is not a novel but an expression of existence. Experiencing this mosaic of stories that converged into a magnificent art piece, I felt the journey of life traveling within myself; the ups and downs almost lulling me across reality - a peaceful place to rest. With all its tragedy, can you believe this story washed me with serenity?

3yr
nita_kanji
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This was so great to read! Keep up the work Prugna! Will definitely recommend your work to others🙌 Thoroughly enjoyed it!! Can’t wait to see what you will release in the future!!

3yr
Foluke_Adewuyi
Foluke_AdewuyiLv1

I love this. This is very brilliant and i am loving this. It's making me want to see the ending. The plot and the your writing ability is really awesome. So proud of you.

3yr
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daniz_
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This writing style is amazing... really beautiful. I can't say anything more to describe how a nice feeling it gives you when you read it...

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