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MorosKyrios
MorosKyriosLv133yr
2021-01-16 13:54

Okay premise but has stupidly long introduction. Many potholes exist for the system: Like how the points earned were spent. It was said that MC was given newbie funds(no mention of exactly how much) in chap 23 but later at 25, it says that MC had zero points. There are still many questionable logics in the available chapters but if it was solved or maybe the later chapters(if released from trial read) be improved' i would say this has potential.

Doomsday Bunker Upgrade

Seventeen Kites
3.7
40 Chs

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Once_Upon_A_Time
Once_Upon_A_TimeLv4

I don't know if you read all of it, but it clearly stated he obtained a newbie package of 100 points . . .

3yr
MorosKyrios
MorosKyriosLv13

"Chen Xin obtained ten points a day at that time. The reason why he managed to save up the required hundred points to upgrade the ventilation system was that he gained an achievement when The System first rounded-up his survival points." that line is in chapter 27... There's no mention how much was the newbie funds. The 100 points you mention is from an achievement.

Once_Upon_A_Time:I don't know if you read all of it, but it clearly stated he obtained a newbie package of 100 points . . .
3yr
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Usagi_mofu
Usagi_mofuLv11

19 chapters, don't have any FPs anymore. And damn, it's slow. 19 chapters and the meteorite still didn't hit Earth. Only the 20th chapter. World background is basically the same as ours world except Vermillion (China basically) is also a superpower. Russia is apparently a warrior's country? I mean, I know they have Putin but...? And America is retarded. I don't think anything is wrong with that. Novel is racist? A bit... Little bit. Not much. Mentioned once then never saw it again. Nationalistic? yes, but tbh, after doomsday comes, are we still gonna hear nationalistic sh*t? I hope not. Author probably still a rookie cuz he is advertising that China is superior so I give him that. His ideas are okay. MC is fortunately quite smart and careful. Author did certain research and hopefully doesn't say nonsense as his descriptions sounds very convincing and real. I also still didn't see MCs system so I can't say much about it. Translation Quality: 5* SoU: 5* Story development: 3* (SLOW AS F, or I am impatient) Character Desisgn: 3* (Not gonna comment) World Background: 2* (Average, nothing new except the whole 'China' (Vermillion) is a superior country) Ah, fun fact. In the novel is stated that Vermillion situation is the best as the country has a good grasp of it's citizens and gotta say. It may be actually true cuz.... YOUR OPINION IS INVALID, GOVERNMENT GO BRRRRRR... Ok, have a nice day everyone. I hate nationalism but it's not THAT bad. It's not saying that other countries are outright inferior, as long you don't mind it you can bear with it and the novel will be quite good. Overall score: 3.6

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TheDolphin
TheDolphinLv13

Pros: Base Building Upgrade System Cons: I haven't read the book Humanity P.S: New layout sucksNew layout sucksNew layout sucksNew layout sucksNew layout sucksNew layout sucksNew layout sucksNew layout sucksNew layout sucksNew layout sucksNew layout sucksNew layout sucksNew layout sucksNew layout sucksNew layout sucksNew layout sucks

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catvi
catviLv5

Novel is VEEEEEEEEERYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY NATIONALISTIC. Avoid if you don't like seeing characters describe how much bigger a chinese dick is from an 'alien' dick.

3yr
Xhaare
XhaareLv15

I want someone to check the raws. Is it China but translator changed it to Vermillion? Would be hilarious if Qidian did that. (Just speculation, I’m simply here for banter; don’t attack me you white knights of Qidian)

3yr
Zedgamer
ZedgamerLv4

Too Much Racism i mean first of all using usa and russia but not china instead vermillion and in every chapter vermillion is the best usa and russia are best but not more than vermillion showing other countries in bad light like usa is very selfish etc

3yr
Ultivexla
UltivexlaLv6

If I could give 'Story Development' 0 stars I would. The story is about what a character does when an asteroid hits earth. The author spends each chapter reminding me that the asteroid is hitting earth while not adding anything of substance to the plot. The chapters are short and with half of every chapter being used to reiterate the fact that the meteorite is landing on earth, then 1/4 of the remaining being used as a nationalism plot drive, only 1/4 of the chapter provides new information. The items acquired by the MC are mentioned in passing but provides no context the environment. The explanations given are useless given the face that the world building wasn't even attempted. I felt as if I could get a more interesting story development from a physics textbook and although reading might be a waste of time as a hobby. I regretted reading this book. It's a shame since the plot was actually interesting but the execution was flawed. Pros : system (still hasn't appeared) Positive comment : the initial plot might be useful as a movie (without the nationalism)

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Protovail
ProtovailLv11

I love the concept and really looked forward to it when I read the synopsis. However, I was quickly disappointed with the amount of arguable useless information. The author should have only used 3-5 chapters for the background instead of 20. As I don't plan on using FPs for this novel I can only base my judgment based off the free chapters hence my review. To those who see this before reading, read the first 3 or so chapters then skip to 20. Everything in-between is pretty much word padding. Good luck to future readers and hope you enjoy.

3yr
Rayama
RayamaLv4

My god does this author drag thingd out... I only read it to 19 chapters cause theres no way I'll go further after seeing a prologue getting dragged out so long

3yr
ANONYMOUS_SHADOW
ANONYMOUS_SHADOWLv4

too much info dump as it took 20 ch just for the meteorite to hit which was in the synonyms and we already knew it was going to hit. and they should have changed all the name not just china's in the novel as that would have been better

3yr
DaoistAdquiro
DaoistAdquiroLv15

Unique idea to the system and apocalypse genre. it also looks like there could be a kingdom building aspect. I hope it gets picked,

3yr
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