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2021-01-26 00:49

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SauceMaster64
SauceMaster64Lv6

I've read the whole 40 chapters of this thing, and hoo boy is it bad. And boring. (TLDR at the end) First of all, if you're expecting some excitement, action, romance, anything of the sort, it's NOT HERE. This is strictly a slice-of-life. I have no idea how this author manages to dodge every other genre except for, Idk, wish fullfilment?? Which is also interesting since the wish fulfillment part is not really all that satisfying. Story goes like this: MC gets money. Buys something. Steals from other guy. Buys something, etc, etc. Also, there's the occasional hook thrown here and there, only to be beaten up and abandoned in an alleyway somewhere. Why set up all these plot lines if you're just gonna throw them away? Every single character is one-dimensional. All the girls are caricatures. Beautiful caricatures, mind you. Plus, I don't get why the author feels the need to add all these beautiful figurines, then proceed to shy away from making the novel a harem. How, you ask? Simply by forgetting about the characters you spend 4-5 chapters reading about. I mean, aside from MC and his family, everyone's in danger of being abandoned. The system in this novel (yes, there's a system) is probably the most arbitrary, convenient piece of shit system I have ever read since Ultimate Scheming System (at least this novel fully embraces its trashiness and proceeds to be entertaining). If I had only one thing to say about the novel, it would be "waste". Everything feels like a waste. Waste of words, of characters, of a premise. Of time. And that's the largest crime a webnovel can commit. Making the reader feel like it's a giant waste of time. TLDR: Cluster**** of ideas author doesn't follow through with. Leave and don't look back.

AsianLadyBoy
AsianLadyBoyLv12

I had high hopes for this novel since i wanted something that i can just mindless lee read, but as time went on the less i enjoyed it. I thought this would be like a wish fulfillment story but then it turned in to a slow passed slice of life. I don't think those two genres mix well. Since i always see wish fulfillment story's fast pass and fun to read while slice of life is always slow day to day and boring. At first i thought i might enjoy it because i was enjoying it at the start till each chapter started to drag on with mindless dribble about nothing important. Spoilers ahead: Spoilers ahead: Spoilers ahead: Spoilers ahead: So the Mc gets a skill that will allow him to get double the money back that he spends. So the MC never really needs to worry about money ever again, but yet he still does. He has this bag that he has to pay 1m yuan to open it.( Cash return skill does not work on the bag) Even if he pays that much there may not be anything in it. But he complains about losing 1m yuan if theirs nothing in it yet he can make that much by buying another car. I feel like the author was using the card as word filler because ever chance he got he repeated the same thing everyone knows when he spends money the "Expenditure cash return". Every time they mentioned him even spending money they will mention that skill in a whole paragraph, like we forgot after the 20th chapter of reading the same thing being said multiple times. One part i found it weird since i get why the cash return skill wont work on the bag but why did it not work when he purchased jade rocks? He does make allot of money from the rocks but then his parents take away most of his money because he's to young even though he's legally an *****(19yOld). Idk kind of put a bad taste in my mouth by how his parents treated him like a kid. When you first read this novel he goes on a shopping spree and spends lots of money after he gets that skill. Then later on he's just sitting in a car for like 15 chapters talking to a girl he highered to be the driver. While going around finishing a mission he got that has him visiting different monuments. Like that's some boring as missions you would only read in a slice of life type story. I was hoping this would be one of those novels were he does things that he wants and he unintentionally becomes famous. But none of those things has happened yet. this seems like an obvious harem as well since every new person he meats seems to always be a girl( i don't hate harems). I was wondering why this novel was only at 4 stars and going down. Now after forcing myself to finish reading it, i know why. The tittle is misleading you think its going to be a fun wish fulfillment but turns in to a slow paced slice of life, that's super boring and nothing interesting actually happens.

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