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YoucanCallmeVENTI
YoucanCallmeVENTILv33yr
2021-01-28 04:36

Not a good story its like summary of the entire anime arcs with mc nerfed as fudge while pulling out random powers out of nothing.. ... Mmmm

(OLD) My Hero Academia: The Overdrive Hero!

LeoLyonWriting
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228 Chs

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Trust me, I've gotten an entire thing explained about his Quirk. Most of the abilities (Telepathy to be exact) is probably the one ability that's rarely used in the story. Plus, if I made his Quirk OP right off the bat, the story wouldn't be interesting whatsoever. Flight and Healing are the two abilities that make the most sense being that his Overdrive aura allows him to fly, outside of Modes 1-5 he can't fly at all. Healing is done simply because of the restorative properties of his Quirk. By that I mean since his body is constantly having to work itself alongside with his fast paced Quirk, it grants him somewhat of "regeneration" that keeps him from overworking himself. This "regeneration" isn't cellular regeneration where he can heal his injuries, it only keeps him from overworking himself (i.e. His arms and legs lockup when he does overwork himself/overuse his Quirk). By using his Overdrive, he can heal others at the cost of his own stamina

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LeoLyonWriting
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Also, I kind of didn't want to just throw him to the wolves by dropping a completely custom arc that would completely avoid the entire story. I figured that would be boring as well, so I decided to go with the much better route and have him in the very start of the My Hero Academia series

3yr
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YoucanCallmeVENTI
YoucanCallmeVENTILv3

No problem thanks for the explanation again.. ....... And sorry for the trouble

LeoLyonWriting:Trust me, I've gotten an entire thing explained about his Quirk. Most of the abilities (Telepathy to be exact) is probably the one ability that's rarely used in the story. Plus, if I made his Quirk OP right off the bat, the story wouldn't be interesting whatsoever. Flight and Healing are the two abilities that make the most sense being that his Overdrive aura allows him to fly, outside of Modes 1-5 he can't fly at all. Healing is done simply because of the restorative properties of his Quirk. By that I mean since his body is constantly having to work itself alongside with his fast paced Quirk, it grants him somewhat of "regeneration" that keeps him from overworking himself. This "regeneration" isn't cellular regeneration where he can heal his injuries, it only keeps him from overworking himself (i.e. His arms and legs lockup when he does overwork himself/overuse his Quirk). By using his Overdrive, he can heal others at the cost of his own stamina
3yr
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LeoLyonWriting
LeoLyonWritingAuthor

It's fine! I honestly need to put an explanation out somewhere lol

YoucanCallmeVENTI:No problem thanks for the explanation again.. ....... And sorry for the trouble
3yr
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Grass_Cutter
Grass_CutterLv4

So far its amazing and is quite frankly one of the best mha fanfics ive read not anything really to improve apon but i just hope with all my heart to do not drop This fanfic.

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BobBuild25
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this is my curreny rev for the work. waiting for future chages!waiting for future chages!waiting for future chages!waiting for future chages!

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White_cat_chelo
White_cat_cheloLv3

My first problem is that it seems strange to me that he will forget such important things in society, why is it not a complete memory loss in which he does not remember anything at all then how can he forget that it is a peculiarity is as if he forgot that he has eyes as if forgetting to breathe. Another thing is that the sister had told him that the peculiarity develops with the body so what happened did he lose his muscles, his muscle mass or he never train that really makes no sense to forget that his society is full of heroes

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LeoLyonWriting
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Reveal spoiler

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VastoHeaven
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Well, am here again ✌ Hope that your reboot goes well👍 123465816381491946197294729472956194068261527494729572057294728387483937374929583037493739458

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TheFoolishHuman
TheFoolishHumanLv2

I swear this is litterly the best MHA Fanfic I've read so far. You know what inspired me to write my on Fanfiction was this story. I love the character designs especially Black-Heart. Thank you author-san!

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GabbyTheKindSeraph
GabbyTheKindSeraphLv3

It's a good work of yours mate! Keep it up! One of the best MHA fanfics that I read for a while! Please never drop your work! Over and Out!

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TheYesFan
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Oh. My. Goodness!! This fanfic feels so underrated! I'm a sap for bnha and this really really is amazing! I have been reading this all day and im in absolute love with it. The way you nail the characters personalities and put your own thing on them is awesome! this definitely needs more attention!

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