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WasteOfOxygen
WasteOfOxygenLv23yr
2020-11-20 03:31

I am not someone who writes reviews for novels (since I'm really lazy, and I mostly like commenting on chapters), but I certainly have to give it to ya, I did not expect this novel to be such a twister. At first when I read the title, it felt like the typical VRMMO novels out there, but this one is a real twister. Now truthfully speaking this is my FIRST review, so I can't give the specifics, but all in all I must give this a 5-star just based on the World Background and Story Development, the chapters have some small grammar mistakes here and there, but nothing too much to worry about since some people can fix those in the paragraph comments. Keep up the good work Author!! I will surely reserve at LEAST 1 power stone and 1 fast pass if it's the last thing I do!

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Lazy_leon
Lazy_leon作者

Thanks👍

WasteOfOxygen
WasteOfOxygenLv2

Your welcome, and I certainly do like the fact that you reply to almost all the questions us readers have in either the paragraph comments or the chapter comments. Keep up the good work!

Lazy_leon:Thanks👍
Lazy_leon
Lazy_leon作者

Cuz most of the time I am writing and I love to know other feeling about my story~

WasteOfOxygen:Your welcome, and I certainly do like the fact that you reply to almost all the questions us readers have in either the paragraph comments or the chapter comments. Keep up the good work!
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Southpaw97
Southpaw97Lv15

OK this is an actual review. I started this novel because like you I thought since it said 5 stars and there a bunch of 5 stars ratings but that is NOT the case. I got to chapter 165 and this is toxic dumpster fire garbage. Why go so far as 165 you say? Well naively I tried to stick it out but it was just so bad. Characters are about as cliche and flat as you can imagine. MC especially. There's no struggle, no real development because everything is handed to him on a silver platter. Even supposed impossible trials are magically achieved because he "happened" to somehow exploit some loophole. And if the Main Character is bad, the supporting characters are worse. They are just there to make the MC look good and power of friendship. No real value. There also just no clear plot line. So much gets introduced and put aside. Like for the Main character is trying to climb a tower dungeon while also being a first year at a school while also being apart of some secret organization then out of nowhere he's attacked from different world from outer space?!? (yes this actually happened). Just makes no sense. The writing quality is also clearly subpar. So many grammer and spelling mistakes it's comical. While I don't mean to be rude but this is no doubt machine translated at best with no revision effort afterward. Updates was a positive. Very Consistent. But thats it. Background is promising but not fleshed out very well or at all really. Many countries and places but no attempt to talk about them or make then anything more then stating "this town in this country". Any way long story short, this is so trash, it's not even good enough to be guilty pleasure trash. Have some standards.

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