Writing quality : As far as I can remember, I fid not see any significant and bothering mistakes. Story development : The pace of the story might be slow for some, but you don't really see any blank spot or filler. Even the side stories bring a lot of information and life to the rest of the character, without being too much (generally 2 to 3 chapter). Character design : The main character (Lucius) is a bit flat and did not really evolve in character during the almost 300 chapter, but the rest of the crew (if we can call it that) really matured and changed significantly in a logical way, which really shows the contrast with Lucius in a good way. Updating stability : A constant 1chap/day rarely interrupted. World background : To rejoin with the story development, the main "pauses" in the story are for world background. Be it for humanity or the rest of the Universe, a lot of places, events, mechanics, stories had been teased or explained, bringing in a lot of depth to the story and making it, in my opinion, one of the novel I like the most ever. Continue the good work author! Thank you so much for this novel, and I'll continue pumping those power stone! I hope it will get more attraction in the future!
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