The character designs are realistic and fleshed out. The MC acts according to his age and does some mistakes, but learns from them. Actions have consequences and some developments happen that are definitely not obvious from the start. The quality of the novel is pretty high. I like it.

Loving the book thus far. Although I haven't read too far into the book, I can still tell the quality of the writing. Hyped to find a novel of such quality among the heaps of copy and paste novels!

Hi there everyone, Author here. Would just like to take a moment to thank everyone who's decided to start reading my novel. Really loving the feedback I'm starting to get and I welcome you to continue letting me know what you think! I've seen my novel go from a handful of readers to almost 1000 in just one month and it feels really good to see that so many of you are taking the time out of your days to read my little story. I work really hard to produce this stuff, but without you all, it wouldn't mean much. So seriously thank you so much, you have my deepest gratitude. For now, I'll leave it here. But I look forward to continuing to entertain all of you in the coming weeks and months! Oh, and there's a discord if you'd like to join! Hope to see you around. Peace for now.~ https://discord.gg/NaSGaqM

The Writing Quality has been good till now(chapter 7), only the names of places and characters have been difficult. The Updates have been steady, chapters are very long and I feel like Author-san can shorten them here. Story has been developing nicely even though there are several unnecessary details at random. Characters are still getting fleshed out, will wait and see World Building hasn't been done much but the MC doesn't know about the world a lot either so it can be excused for now. Will update after reading more. Keep up the good work author, and readers do check this novel out.

Keep up the good work,i can see the difference in commitment on your work as your brother i am fully behind you on this. 20k views rai that nothing to scof at. Picking back up from chapter 5 and gonna finish ill be back to comment on the 74 chapters then. Much love rai keep it up

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I'll give it a review first before reading... If this novel can hold my attention I'll review it again... hopefully this is nice, based on the synopsis it's pretty promising...

This is one of the great ones, would definitely recommend. The plot starts slow and may leave you wanting for details, but quickly makes up for it. The breadcrumbs of mysterious lore will keep you sucked in and itching to learn more. The world building is solid and the characters are well-developed. The author explains events and concepts well, without giving too much away. The power system has a proper amount of complexity and balance. The MC of the story kind of falls under the "chosen one" archetype, and is given a bit of plot armour, but it's not horribly unreasonable or extensive. Grammatical/punctuational errors are sparse, and those that can be found don't affect readability. Overall, this novel has great potential. The writing is of good quality, the story is interesting, and the world feels real. 8/10 would definitely recommend.

Really enjoying the story thus far. I always catch myself reading again to find out what happens next. Great story telling that pulls you back in. I recommend the read for those medieval and fairytale lovers!

exp review don't mind me pls here's some 5 stars tho since I haven't read it yet :) fillerforlettercapfillerforlettercapfillerforlettercapfillerforlettercap