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Yukina_Miu
Yukina_MiuLv24yr
2020-09-16 18:31

Defenetly an interesting story, both plot, and character-wise. From the few chapters that I have read I can say its a story worth giving a read to, and the writing itself is fantastic. best regards, author.

Accidentally Awakened a Prince

deepu_
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13 Chs

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Doaist7569
Doaist7569Lv13

so far it's good.. please update everyday.. Even though there are some grammar mistakes it can be rectified and your book has good potential keep up the good work author

4yr

deepu_
deepu_Author

This is a thank you note frome me, author. Thank you for letting me win bronze tier in WFP#11.. please do continue your support and love for the novel

4yr
mohammad_lal
mohammad_lalLv2

story and plot is so nice, keep up the good work. check out the grammar as well as your having potential to become a great author , you should have a look on that too by which you can increase more users to read your books.

4yr
daoist346
daoist346Lv11

this book is very interesting.. it's clearly visible how much effort author put into explaining the Egyptian culture. Looking forward for the meeting of leads.

4yr
Flabbergasted
FlabbergastedLv4

The novel is good and so is the character development. The only problem I have is with the dialogue, other mistakes which are minor. I recommend this book for you, check it out

4yr
Joel_West
Joel_WestLv12

mostly for potential, hopefully there are some more chapters soon. I generally don't read this genre, but i can appreciate where youre going, and most interesting is the setting. you've heard enough about grammar so I won't harp on it. Keep it up.

4yr
Snowyshift
SnowyshiftLv11

Reveal spoiler

4yr
deepu_
deepu_Author

This is not a review but I am trying to write in a different style and I would like the readers to give it a try and help me in winning WFP contest.. If you stumble upon the book please add to your library and give it a try

4yr
iam_adh
iam_adhLv2

The plot for this story is interesting. Using locations that we're familiar with -such as Egypt- and cultures as well, it's easy for me to understand what's going on. However, I do have some suggestions. For example, if you could, perhaps describe the places you have your characters in with a bit more detail. Sometimes I find that I'm confused when reading. Another thing is the grammar. Of course I can understand typos and things, we all make mistakes, but the repeated grammatical errors is something that should be fixed as soon as possible. I noticed that you have the habit of doing this to your dialogue: Stephen brushed his pants off saying" yes, I feel as if we should go to Egypt" A way to fix such a sentence, I suggest you try: Stephen brushed his pants of saying, " Yes, I feel as if we should go to Egypt." Besides these things, I'm very interested in this story and can't wait for more, keep it up author!

4yr
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