This story gonna blow up soon! Love the story so far! The plot is an intresting take on an overused narrative but the author makes it work with awesome character development and world building. Give it a try!

Very good quality of every aspect and very enjoyable with a good development and belivable but funny characters. If i were to add anything it would more grinding for levels

i guess ill review this, however take this review with a grain of salt since we are only barely getting started with the actual game. the first 40 chapters are purely prelude to what is actually going to happen but this is my opinion of things so far. writing quality is pretty solid. simple easy to read writing, i dont find myself doing double takes on strange wording or similar things. overall good. updates. if the author can keep up his 2 chapters every other day ill be impressed. he has also done the smart thing and mass released the first many chapters in a short time frame to draw attention, now he just need the golden stars from the review to really draw attention in this oversaturated genre. the story is a bit hit or miss, its not very unique, but it is tried and tested, so you kind of know what to expect. i suppose its mostly personal preference, but i kind of look on in contempt the way he handle slaves mostly because i think im allergic to these neutral good types. and i think its hilariously hypocritical to have such strong stance on slavery while binding the adventure guild woman to eternal master-slave relationship. whatever. onto the next point. characters are ok. the mc and the wolf girl i quite like and their relationship makes sense. i like his friend and his wife. however the relationship with the mermaid woman and the adventure guild woman, kinda rub me the wrong way. mermaid does a 180 far too quickly and she feels forced into the story a bit too quickly because he needed the secretary type, the same goes for adventure guild woman, i know he needed someone versed in the world, but i just really dont like her...? oh yeah the r18 scenes are pretty cute. even if you arent really much into r18 content, its really short and sweet and generally dont take up much of the content. anyway enough ranting. the world is probably the most compelling, i find the monolith group story really good, and it makes alot more sense than the usual "black technology" or something similar explanation. so good job here author. we also have a pretty decent chunk of knowledge on the world, and i find the native faction and inhabitants act. fairly natural. the world is easily the most compelling about this story so far. so good job here. some compare it a bit to the novel "guild wars", while not wrong. the mcs temperament is completely different to draco. i find this novel alot closer to "Fate's Reversal: The Divines Return". keep up the good work. and again take this with a grain of salt, this is only my opinion and we are only 40 chapters in. best of luck -88

good story so far keep up good work .......................................................

the world building and character design is grate I was in love with the story at first... after some chapters there were too many useless s$x related skills so I go to the tags and there is harem and 18+ this is where I will probably drop but if you like that kind of book I recommend it to you

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Why did the author stop😭😭😭😭😭 I love reading this story it was wonderful so I hope you can continue with it im sure everyone who’s read it agrees😭😭😭

i like this novel and i hope it doesn't get dropped. i like this novel and i hope it doesn't get dropped. i like this novel and i hope it doesn't get dropped.

It's a very good novel and fun to read. My only real problem with it is the inconsistency of the uploads. Else I can only recommend this story to the interested.

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