Writing Quality 3.0 - while there are consistent mistakes like misspellings and a few sentences are a bit hard to understand, it's still readable if you ignore the mistakes. I recommend using Grammarly for mistakes. Story Development 4.5 - same plot as COTE(duh it's fanfic) but with some slight changes Character Development 5.0 - for the most part, you got the Characters/Personalities of the COTE spot on. some relationships might seem rushed but it's not it's just in the mini time skips😂 Updating Stability 4.5 - I don't really know the update schedule since there have only been 11 chapters out, but so far it's been daily updates. World Background 5.0 - don't really know what to say here, since the world is basically the same as earth, only slight changes like country names and some parts of history. apart from some misspellings, it's an enjoyable read to me. sorry if my review is inaccurate since it's my first time making a review😅 P.S.: if you have any questions drop them down and I'll try my best to answer them👍
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贊ArchbishopOfSloth:If you don't mind, can you point me out my mistakes especially Grammar's mistakes
ArchbishopOfSloth:If you don't mind, can you point me out my mistakes especially Grammar's mistakes
Ok, I used Grammarly but not in the premium. I will try to rewrite some paraphrases. Can you tell me which paragraphs mainly That way I can see my problems. Again thank you mate
Plucas:and fix some sentences that don't make sense but Grammarly can fix that