It's not a story for everyone. The only reason I am saying it is because the MC, is ridiculously OP and many people will fuss about it but well this is a fanfic about a senju with an uchiha father and the hime no Senju as a mother so deal with it. Other factor that might be hard for people to accept is Rin being a love interest and as of C40 the story was very in line with the actual history and that was satisfying with no weird character insert so the author definitely did his research for writing and it is very much appreciated. Other factors that I might say that I dont like is the author might change the genre to harem coz of some 'annoying msges' about Rin being a love interest. I mean come on dude... Rin is fine and watching Obito suffer can be a past time duh. So hopefully it will not be a harem label or atleast not one with more than 2 wives (please dont ruin the narutoverse love lines its beautiful to see everyone meets their spouses as time passes) thats all Thank you for the story its a good one and your writing style is comfortable to read. Might just want to add a little reminder on the POV change tho just a little suggestion. much love brother
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What good do u seen in rin? For me its nothing she has no good qualities. she not even beautiful.
The main issu is that he won the war for konoha while being 5 years old and no one questions it, as if you had enough time to be self-taught in wood release and fuinjutsu by the age of 5... I like OP but the author doesn't bother to make people smart and when the 5 years old weapon of mass destruction goes "I can use wood release by the way", everyone just goes "he is such a good genius". All the characters are are OOC because of that and the MC just doesn't have to explain anything and is sent to war at 5...It's so cringe it hurts
