Item: The ML and his Villianess.
Rating: 5

N_Stephanie_SantosLv133yr

2021-02-20 00:46

Very good story I would for sure recommend to anyone BUT to me is missing the PoV of the ML I am only saying this based on my own thoughts, Why ? Well to start so far I have no idea who Liam really is, apart from the interaction of him with Eve when they meet and talk, when he first met her what was his thoughts at that time, had he already met Rose as well Eve said that he had but she could be wrong no 🤔, is Liam and Rose friends, when did he discovered his feelings for Eve when they first met, when they was chating online or When they kissed i wanted to know his side of story, and why Rose went to his apartment what happened when she was there, did he and her had some sort of relationship in the past, I have many questions about Liam’s life, This why the Pov of Liam Is important so that we can have a connection with him when reading his thoughts and decisions. Even saying all this the story is very good hope u all will try.

The ML and his Villianess.

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