Review Detail of Moonshinexx in The RISE Of NATHALIA CARTER

warning spoiler ahead! This novel little different than other CN usual out there just some op feel like human that what i feel look normal. I cant comment on grammar because my english is bad to. sorry but what can i say the plot is normal not intrigue me more than i should. Where Fl doesnt have a happy fam that i sad about on early chapter where everyone around is really amuse me with they stupidity. FL is good accept she lack of love soo pity yet i love her. Cant help because the imperfect make me want to read more. Fox but sometimes act like a act want to cuddle to their owner. Lack of love make her cute. She rebirth but acting like not when ml show up . ML nah got a same family problem about the parent well what a beautiful couple isn't it ? He follow her mum like a good son that make mad. He even look like kids throwing tantrum whem argue. Lame but that amuse me never have ml like that. nice one author. He rich but Fl better on temperament. The plot wow really normal rare to see suggest u guys read it. Betrayed is really hard to accept but she keep playing with the parents never take real revenge even they argue never ending what more the sibling wow .stupid level 999. if i meet on real life Hahahahha funny i dont know what i will do so many plan on my head cause i want to defend FL. World background is lack. Rare to mention their house situation, how its look, what area they live or mybe im the on forgot about that .Sometime suddenly she on another place without note. Start on school phase but not even show how the school are. Should describe more. Character Design. hmm what i always read about Fl calmness, childish when eat. thats it lack too .this story is 800 but at ch 100 still no improvement that lame should act at that chp on improvement already. writing samething better next time. Story development? nah so-so . the time skip Lame. What hppen that skip not mention in early stage. Time skip happen in 1 sentence. Does that work? wow i re read that ch trice to understand it. Like i said early this novel is normal rare to read try read this mybe this what make you guys better, intrigue u like me. Dont epend on my review only cause this is my opinion alone. thanks author for the novel, love this normal Fl i love that.. Lack of love, family betrayed, alone Fl, normal friends, normal love story. except op richness of ML wow cute. from me reader shion