Review Detail of Liquidbeast in HPRP (New Chapters in fanfic section version)

I like your story, many characters gain power but at what cost? Their effort, there are many possibilities but they never understand that many things have consequences, that is why my favorite chapter is the second, their determination is quite good and revenge does not consume it, in my place I would try a dismemberment of all. They, even though he travels to a world he is aware of, does not make everything fun and laughter while humiliating his enemies, showing us the sad truth of society regardless of the world.