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2020-11-12 17:38

yessssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss, you come back better than ever man, keep up with the excelent work, if you could maintain a slow peace, i apreciate, let s have 200+ chapters at least for this novel. i have to adimit, i had never expect twilight could ever be this good

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I have a request ( if you like it), make other female character have a crush on the mc (but no harem or cheating, like his view her like a friend, but she likes him), could be some wolf girl or other female vampire like IRINA( dam she is hot) or other of her sisters, i think the story is more interesting when you have a love triangle, making rosalie have some kind of jealous reaction( she has a yandere vibe, is good).

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And Bella has a wird vibe with the mc..... humm.....liked it

RaGnAr_SK:I have a request ( if you like it), make other female character have a crush on the mc (but no harem or cheating, like his view her like a friend, but she likes him), could be some wolf girl or other female vampire like IRINA( dam she is hot) or other of her sisters, i think the story is more interesting when you have a love triangle, making rosalie have some kind of jealous reaction( she has a yandere vibe, is good).
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