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owener
owenerLv44yr
2020-08-04 23:16

I tried giving it so many chances because I love the concept, but this is just too much. If he was a child being oblivious and stupid and too trusting would be acceptable and could lead to growth. This is just pathetic. Stay away for your own sakes.

I'm Invincible Now?

LaughingSalt
4.5
1 Chs

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Crimson_Assassin
Crimson_AssassinLv12

By too many chances, do you mean 1? Cause I can’t remember any other times he was way to trusting besides chapter 16 with daisy

4yr
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Ji_Yidao
Ji_YidaoLv14

Ur wrong and ur dumb. Owener just got owned. 😎

4yr
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Skiterz
SkiterzLv5

meh there are indeed some issues on that part of the story, author will likely fix that once he got some time to do so. this part was meant to be the 'character development' arc, he just made the character more dense than what should be acceptable, (shrug) mistakes happens. so long the overall story is good which it is. try reading until chapter 37, because his mindset get a big change around that one.

4yr
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Good story, terrible synopsis. A few early MC decision "flaws" are explained over the story which shows a good bit of planning and character consistency, but webnovel readers tend towards low patience, so it could maybe do with a bit more explanation of protagonist thought process for some decision making moments. For those wanting a better synopsis, see below: After a string of bad luck and persecution from corrupt mobsters, John had little left apart from his life and he was about to lose even that. So when he got the option to join the Mission Worlds, he chose "yes." Now a powerful pyromancer he knows he can get his revenge. The new question is can he survive his new lifestyle? And how can he rescue his parents? Anything is possible in the Mission Worlds. You just have to be strong enough to take it. Includes: system, power growth, somewhat OP MC, clever MC (but not-socially-robotic), empire building.

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Crimson_Assassin
Crimson_AssassinLv12

Wow I just realized that I never left a review for this book, so first of all, this book is incredible, probably one of my favorites despite only having 66 chapters, the author is extremely responsive and responds to criticism or questions, now there is only one part of this book that might make people drop it and that is around chapter 16, where MC acts irrational, but trust me and continue reading past that point and I guarantee that you’ll love it, please add this book to your collection so the author will continue with 2 chaps a day 🥺

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Adam110902
Adam110902Lv10

First:if you at some point get annoyed at mc, because he is too dense, or does something that could make you stop, read chapter 66, as long as author doesn't replace it with a normal one, it contains a bit of explanation to what, and why happened, but don't read it too early, before chapter 10,or there will be spoilers, now about tge story. Characters are great, world is detailed, and makes sense, power systems are good, and precise, and mc, while being op, isn't boring, and not just because there is always someone stronger, but because he knows what is he doing, he has a target, and tries to get to it, overall, don't drop, the problems usually are for a few chapters at most, problems with the book, not the problems of mc

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You encountered a very shameless looking <Author>. Updates: I release 2 chapters per day. At least 1500 words per chapter. Can go up to 2,500 words though. Usually 2,000 words for now. Please help evolve this 3K2Chapmon to a 10K5Chapmon. I read through each chapter at least 3 times, usually 4 or 5 times, trying to catch typos. Please leave a comment if you find anything funky. Also, please hit that [ADD TO LIBRARY] button. It's super important to me. Your support is much appreciated. Thank you.

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Adam110902
Adam110902Lv10

This story is fucking amazing, you should read this....................................................................................................

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Ignore the synopsis, this novel is one of the best novels on this site and I dont say that lightly. Uts highly underrated for its placement and relatively new. The MC is a little dense in the first 15 chapters but his mindset quickly adapts and it's a hella good read. TLDR it's a good read just read it

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naruto_shipu07
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I love it! Pls make more and dont drop☺☺☺ This is a good novel with op mc Sorry if my review is bad im young kid lol

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NotUse
NotUseLv4

I've read fifteen chapters so far and I've got to say, this is one of the best originals I've ever read. Truly, the author has a talent in writing who has mastered most of the grammar rules. There are no errors or typos except for the punctuation but they are very minimal. I think I only saw three comma misuses so definitely not worth downgrading the writing quality; therefore, I'm still giving this novel five stars. Let's go the plot. The plot, though common, is interesting. I see that the author had added his/her own twists to it which makes it less cliche. Word choice is absolutely brilliant and I've taken note of some of them. (Hehe) I wish the author the very best!

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