You could do a POV switch. In the later part of the chapter I thought the Alexio or whatever his name was, was going to kill a person. It confused me. And for some reason I fell the writing quality could be better. Anyway I don’t know about the stability of development, but I hope to see you updating this. Hope you do!
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