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UTGaster
UTGasterLv41yr
2023-04-13 16:43

The story does what a story should do, it feels good to read. Now if your expecting a perfect novel go to your local library, but if your looking for a entertaining read thats what your going to get here. Do wish it updated a little faster but I can accept and respect the current speed.

Rewrite! DC: True Power of Ancient Saiyan

Demon_King22
4.6
52 Chs

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Skarlet_Retro
Skarlet_RetroLv15

good setup so far and we been get a good image of his strength and character

1yr

Demon_King22
Demon_King22Author

Never thought I would write fan fiction. But here we are. As the author, it is an obligation that I rate it 5 stars. But I have been having fun writing this, so it is a 5/5 for me. Thanks for giving this humble creation a try, if you did. That's more than what I can ask for. :)

1yr
Demiurge_Ohara
Demiurge_OharaLv11

your English suck, one that requires multiple checks just to understand the scenes, it breaks the immersion, and the execution is so-so, the idea is noise but so far generic.idk why people rate it so high. It isn't even that good. average at best, unreadable at worst. (Y? again, your English is horrendous. )

1yr
RemoteRomance
RemoteRomanceLv4

MC starts dumb and acts like a simp (also, get ready for the author to start talking about his tastes and over describing women) But in the late 30s chapter wise the MC finally starts acting like a saiyan and has some pride. Didnt like the story at first but now i am relatively interested. Keep up the good work.

1yr
Kaitozc7
Kaitozc7Lv12

Great idea and potential storyline, but I will be honest here the grammar is a mess, I read chapter 4 to 7 and I have to read some sentences 2-3 times to understand what the author is trying to say.

1yr
TFH
TFHLv6

will wait..m authot has dropped over 10 novels, 1 reached higher than 60 and the others 20-30 chapters before being dropped.

1yr
Privateminiarnold
PrivateminiarnoldLv14

Awesome story thanks for making it also love how you made him a doomsday clone

1yr
The_man_The_myth
The_man_The_mythLv4

boku no pico was my first anime. amazing masterpiece, but the characters could be more consistent. in the first episode pico had an amazing character arc with his best buddy. sadly, the ice cream arc was too sad to watch for me so i couldn't see because of the tears i shed that fateful day. the second episode was even better with much more characters and worldbuilding that made every fan shook in their seat. the swimming arc had great CGI and i know they just took it from Michael Faps but the technology they used to produce it was otherworldly. There was also mindnubbing storytelling thst told the children watching to eat fruit such as bananas. The third episode was my favourite. beautiful animation and city landscape that looks like it was taken from Paris and painted by Leonardo di Caprisun. 10/10 MAL score, modern classic, hyped for new season!

1yr
Cat_Tip
Cat_TipLv14

Bruh your updating status is harsh on my mind. I don’t know if I should even start enjoying this since it will prob get dropped.

1yr
Melshan
MelshanLv7

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