Review Detail of AnotherAtlas in Nani Da F*ck?!?! Is It Really Wrong To Just Rage Quit On The Dungeon?!

Grammar is annoying at the start. Author didn't seem to know when to use on, at, in. Got a bit better later. Updates, well, there was a ten month gap between chapters 3 and 4. Hopefully that doesn't get repeated. Certain jokes are a bit too immature/low level. It also feels like there's some useless descriptions as padding. I don't like main characters that have a panic attack as soon as they arrive. Just tells me that the mc will probably be very annoying and have an arbitrary mental breakdown (again) in the future or something, which is just a waste of time. As for the world, you basically know what you're getting since it is a fanfic, and I can appreciate that. Edit: And look at that, I was correct, sadly. The novel has at least two mental breakdowns just in the first chapter. I really hate these whiny sorts of mcs. It's not even that they are feeling emotional, it's that they waste so much of their and your time. It's like, boohoo, get over yourself. Do something instead of crying every time. Edit: Alright, I was trying to force myself to read through this garbage novel, but I give up at chapter 2. The mc does nothing. This novel sucks. Don't even read it.