It definitely has potential, the only thing i always wonder is. Why the mc's always master 1 weapon, like why not be versatile. Besides that, i don't like how he 'creates' people. But that's just me, btw why does he not change his body? Who would want to be 5'6 rather then 6'2 or something like that? And make himself handsome, i mean...everyone would do that right? Anyway, the idea is good the potential is there. But if you do something with that, is something im not sure of. I think, as long you don't do stupid sh*t like telling someone of his reincarnation, or make to many oc's because many don't like that (me included) then you are fine. Ah forgot to say, don't nerv him. Maybe Rouge as love interest? I don't even know if this ff is gonna have romance, but i hope so. And pls don't give a fu*k about cannon, i never saw a ff with Rouge as the girl of the mc so maybe do that. I know Ace is important, but who cares? Anyway Good Luck.
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