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DaisyberryLv134yrDaisyberry

A simple and funny apocalpsye novel with an op mc. Comedys pretty good and I like the characters so far. But my biggest peeve with the story is the major grammar and writing errors throughout the story. Sometimes I feel like I'm reading an mtl and at certain points I cant even understand whats happening. I know its tough managing checks on each chapter while keeping a constant schedule but if he can clean it up, this novel will improve majorly.

Overpowered Soul Transmigrate In Apocalypse

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Thanks for the review!

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Lazy_leon作者Lazy_leon

Thanks for the review!