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BaeVida
BaeVidaLv144yr
2020-05-30 23:10

What can I say, nice title and your cover page portrays that well. Good synopsis, tell you what you need to grasp the novel. Nice writing quality, love the flow of your narration and dialogue, little or no typo error. No grammatical error as well. From the few chapters I have read, I can say your world background description is good. I am already itching to give a solid 5 starts, no doubt author knows what she is doing. You also have a way of keeping your readers in the story and wanting to read more especially with little suspense at the end of the chapter. This is a highly recommended, for those who love murder and mystery. Added to my library, author kept it up.

The Billionaire's Beloved

prada_murthy
4.8
21 Chs

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prada_murthy
prada_murthyAuthor

Thank you so much, dear. Love you.

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BaeVida
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Wlc. Love u 2

prada_murthy:Thank you so much, dear. Love you.
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lucabear
lucabearLv2

One chapter in and I'm interested :) Dialogue was smooth, descriptions were good and the story itself was intriguing enough to make me want to read more :) keep it up

4yr

_Rain
_RainLv11

The plot is very intriguing. The whole novel gave off an eerie feeling but reading it made me sit on the edge of my seat. I'm very curious on how Melanie plans to take revenge or would she join hands with the Ml. I really liked how you used the words in the story and being a valid reader of the author's previous work, I really look forward to the future chapters. I'm sure this would be a very interesting story.

4yr
yaejin
yaejinLv3

The cover and title itself gave me an eerie feeling and reading it made me understand why I felt that lol. The story is growing smoothly and the suspense is building. I like Melanie already, such a beautiful soul. And that intro slap.... Just wow... 😆 The best way to introduce the ml. The revenge plot is interesting.. I would love to read it more.

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zetsubouaichan
zetsubouaichanLv14

I read this up to chapter 12. Oh wow! I was hooked from the very first chapter! The story has just started, but at this point, I was intrigued to know what happened and what will happen. The writing was nice and I love the author's writing style. It was easy to read. What I love most is the dialogue. It felt very natural and I especially love the interaction between Adrian and Steve. I have a good feeling that this will be a good thriller romance. Keeping this in my library. Good luck, author!

4yr
LTLLucas
LTLLucasLv1

Love the first chapter. The eerie and suspenseful feel this book gave me was unlike most cheesy horror movies or drama. In this one, you feel both sorry for the woman and are a little creeped out by her. Of course, the setting was not only well established, but was described briefly but effectively.

4yr
minho_Shiny
minho_ShinyLv3

Wow... The synopsis gave a suspense vibe and I'm looking forward to read next chapters. A good and unique story. The plot is very captivating and the writing quality is also good with detailed description. The story development is also good. Not too fast nor not too slow. Keep up the good work author. And I'm adding this book in my Library😊

4yr
Freeya_fanfan
Freeya_fanfanLv11

Oh I smelled a mystery novel? The writings for this are quite well done and made me excited to know what's next, like how a good mystery novel should be. Though I find some scene jumped to the next quite fast, but other scenes are explained in great details as well. Overall, a solid piece of mystery (with elements of romance) novel :)

4yr
jaswanthi059
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Imaan00
Imaan00Lv3

This story is seriously so interesting. I love the characters and the plotline. The writing style is also pretty amazing. Hoping for more chapters soon :)

4yr
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