Review Detail of TypeVos in Toaru Majutsu no Index: Dark Matter Project

This is the first fan-fiction that I have read regarding 'Index' story-line and I have to say that I am loving it. This story covers a character who experiences hell through various forms. It has certain elements that some people will love; dark, gritty, cruel and amazingly at times heart-warming. This is a great story to read. For the Author; I would recommend trying to build on character interactions. In what I mean, is making the interactions seem more alive, rather than an conversation that is just happening. Additionally, working on the development of creating a connecting background to others parts of the 'Index' universe. Other than that, keep up the great work!