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2021-01-03 09:50

This story is one of my personal favorites. It has great world-building and an interesting power system. The characters and their actions are explained well and feel very real. The world and interactions are somewhat mysterious at first, but the author steadily divulges info through dialogue and descriptions in a refreshing way without much info-dumping. Updates aren't a problem, only issue is the poorer grammar and writing early on. Chapter 90 onwards sees a significant improvement in writing quality and consistency though. Overall, a unique world/story with loveable characters and a plot with real pressure that really pulls you in. The MC is probably too naive for some tastes and the story starts slow, but it really picks up leaving you just wanting more. Really can't say enough praise about this book, if the writing quality and slow-start are turning you off, give it a shot, I'm sure you'll be suprised :-) TLDR: This series is a hidden gem

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JhiThan_Ser
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Thank you very much for the honest review:)

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Woooh! I just finished the first arc of this story, and I truthfully believe that this is one of the best stories I've ever read and trust me, I've read a lot. The novel is well-thought of, awesome, original and unique, there has never been a dull moment from start to finish. So that is why I recommend and suggest you read this novel, reasons why: Translation/Writing Quality: The translation is superb, it's like the kind of stories you read fluently without having to stop halfway every sentence just to correct a misspelt word or mistake. I've seen little to no errors regarding the punctuation or grammar so it's easier to understand what's going on. Updating Speed: It's one of the great things I like about this story; Evaluating this novel's update speed to other novels I've read out there is simply a farcry in comparison to this one. I love binge reading, 2 chapters a day, everyday (is the best your gonna get) is enough for me. World Building: Unlike, a few stories I've read up online and here, (this one included) the build up is nice, as it gives you the information and roles of other places, and doesn't just throw stuff at you and expects you to 'adapt' like the main character (unless you can) but, also describes where the MC stands, gives the necessary information and gives you that feeling of being within the story, and not just a reader. Character Design: Though this is a survival based story and has some-what a limited amount of characters; each and every one of them are well-tailored out and have unique personalities with different stories. Story Development: The plot of this story is truly fascinating I say, I've read plenty stories and translated novels online to know that this piece of work has little to no tropes in it. The pacing of the story is actually persistent, not too fast(to skip the good parts out) and not to slow(never leaves you yawning), as the MC doesn't just become over-powered 'over night' (get it😏). It pulls and keeps your attention, because once you start your gonna wanna finish; always on the edge of your seat. An amazing and exciting story, never a dull moment. Keep up the good work Author. I rate this 5 stars!

MediocreSkater
MediocreSkaterLv13

Writing quality: Highly well done. Little to no grammer mistakes. High quality writing Update stability: From what I am seeing currently I have been getting chapters consistently Story development: Although there are some instances of plot armor it doesn't detract from the story and there are very rarely any tropes. Pacing does not feel fast but never feels slow and the story develops beautifully. I always find myself looking forward to new chapters. (I normally wait until there are 8+ chapters to pile up before I read them because I won't be satisfied reading 1-2 chapters a day) Charecter design: One of the strongest points in the story are the charecters. All are very realistic and the protagonist Renir is a naive MC. This MC is quite a rarity in webnovel but it also what makes this unique. Over the course of these 100 chapters I have read the charecter development of Renir is one of the best I have seen in webnovel. Although there are not many charecters all of them are unique and rich as well as the charecter interactions feel very real. World background: The world of Gantlet is described quite well and isn't given all at once like an info dump. You slowly discover new information about this mysterious world and the different stages in it. I really feel like I am within the story and never breaks the immersion which is the downfall of many novels. Overall a top tier book in webnovel that is severely underrated. This novel is the definition of a hidden gem. Keep it up author 👍

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