As of now it's a good story.... But we're only at the beginning and don't know much about the MC and the world.... But what you can say though is that the world has a strong potential really.... Update stability : No problem Writing quality: No problem Editing : No problem This story overall seems quite slow paced which I really love, yet the author succeed in making each chapter useful for the story. At least as of now. Only downside : I find the fights a bit too long for my taste but it's still alright... So give it a try !
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LIKEWell, I'm not that much of a fan of fighting... An MC that is forced to fight every 5 chapter and that every 5 chapter it's kind of the same thing happening again and again.... it's boring if your not a fan of reading fights... If every fight are important for the story then yes they must be done but if it's fighting for fighting.... well... And after that if the fight is necessary it must be entertaining... honnestly the 5 part of the most recent fight I would have preferred 3 chap, but that's only to my own taste as I already said 😂 things were well written just a bit long for me...
Anone:Thanks for the review! I'll keep trying my best. I actually thought the fights were too short😅😅😅😅
Hmmm🤔🤔🤔you actually make some valid points. Well I'll put that in mind the next time I'm writing fights
Opepop:Well, I'm not that much of a fan of fighting... An MC that is forced to fight every 5 chapter and that every 5 chapter it's kind of the same thing happening again and again.... it's boring if your not a fan of reading fights... If every fight are important for the story then yes they must be done but if it's fighting for fighting.... well... And after that if the fight is necessary it must be entertaining... honnestly the 5 part of the most recent fight I would have preferred 3 chap, but that's only to my own taste as I already said 😂 things were well written just a bit long for me...