Item: Subordination system
Rating: 4.4

Schrodinger_s_catLv114yr

2020-05-11 02:50

Great at least for now. The writing could improve, but it's not too bad. The big problems come from the way the author handles the speech and the quotations marks that go with it. In terms of character design and world background, these are temporary scores which are bound to change later.

Subordination system

a_regular_student

4.1

344 Chs

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I'm about to do what's called a pro gamer move *laughs evilly* Okay but seriously, this is my first novel and I'm still inexperienced if you have any advice or critics(good or bad) feel free to tell. Thanks in advance

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caboose123Lv11

I really like this novel but the chapters are a bit short but I think it’s great 👍 *_*. O_0. ^_^ #_# 🥋🏋️‍♂️🏋️🏋️‍♂️🏋️‍♂️🏋️‍♂️🏋️‍♂️🏋️🤸🏽🏋️🤸🏽🏋️‍♂️🏋️‍♂️🤸🏽🤸🏽🏋️‍♂️🤸🏽🏋️‍♂️🥌🥌🥌🥌🥌🥌🌻🌻🌻🌷🌼🌼🌼🌼🌼🌷🌼🌼🌼🌜💐🌜💐🌜🌾🌻🌝🌿🥀🍀🌾🌲🌷🎄🌝🌼🎄💐🎄🌕☘️🌷🎄🌓🎄🌻🎄🌼

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i really dont care whats others think but omg this is a gem im so glad i found this novel its unreal please whatever you do keep going and dont drop

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Katherine_EmmettLv4

I see people giving it a bad rating and I feel bad because I love this story there is amazing character development the authors wrighting improves although the beginning is a little meh it gets a whole lot better and that whole meh part just becomes character development although I was look for a different type of story this completely surprised me and I love it during the beginning it might seem like the mc was wasting his time later in the story the skill that he got during that time are not very visible but important to the story and the character it's slow pasted but every chapter and event bring more understanding to the world around and the characters the mc does start with only 2 people on his side that slowly changes it's part of the slow pasted and it not like he magically get more people on his side he has to talk and create friendship or his original 2 I do think the title fits as not only do I think that we are only seeing the beginning of what the system can do I also think that there is no other title that fits this story I hope people see this review and don't worry about the bad reviews and get at least 100 in that is definitely when you have seen its charm the bad reviews are probably people from the beginning chapters and didn't really get into the real story

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Joachimbj2Lv15

i feel like the name of this stroy does not match perfectly with the actual story. it's really slow paced (no problems there). But I walked in on this story hoping for a more "Ruler"/Guild master setting. a good story all in all but I'm missing the "subordination" part of this, he only controls two people really and some NPC's. **: MC is a absolute idiot.

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Mrmonste_ThulLv12

This storys premise is delightful except for the fact that i have no idea what is going on or what anyone saying or what theyre doing. Kid gets abducted because some people said theyd guve his parents money and hes like “sure” doesnt question anything. Then when theyre explaining there objectives within the worlds the dont feel coherent. This feels like it might continue to be a prevalent issue and while I understand that english might not be your first language I cannot reccomend this in good conscience.

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Cardinal_SystemLv3

It’s amazing!! The character development and the pace of the story are very good. The story in itself is incredible. A few grammar errors here and there but otherwise it’s one of my favorite stories rn. Keep it up Author-san!!

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QTiLv3

Very good, but I think the author must issue a longer or more chapter because the story is slow developing and this is somewhat good and be if we continue like this it will take a long time for God and we are waiting for the game of the least issued more chapters until you reach a good development so that we can wait for the chapters longer please please (apologize to the rules The bad I use is a paid translation program, please ignore it) Thank you

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