Writing Quality - 3/5 - It is a good read but it's painful to read each paragraph. For example, you always wrote in... Smiling wryly, (Name) bla bla bla Next paragraph: Looking at the interface, (Name,) bla bla bla Next paragraph: Sucking a cold bla bla, (Name) bla bla Critics: Next time, change the way you wrote for a better read, cause every paragraph is painful to read because as soon you made a paragraphs every time you made a comma ', ' the next word you wrote is always the mc name or side character name; After the comma making it cringe to read. Stability of update: 5/5 - Not much to say since the author put effort to update every day. Story Development: 4.5/5 - Minus 0.5 for the mc. Character Design: 4/5 - Minus 1 for the misinformation in the early chaps for the character design. I don't want to be racist so let's just wrap it up in mystery. World Background: 5/5- Very Good! ***** Overall: It's a good read, definitely recommended for those wanted a humorous r18 novel. Some paragraph mistakes, typos, and misinformation. But it is still an enjoyable read. Definitely 5/5 for the author for creating such a brilliant work.
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