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M1XALI0
M1XALI0Lv144yr
2020-08-10 22:47

One of the best pokemon stories out there.hope he can do more than just communicate with pokemon in the future. Cheers to more chapters. .

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LostThe50_50
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Bruh......i dont know how you did it but.....you did....it's my first time writing a review with a novel that does not even have 20 chapters yet.....more than that...while i do give reviews to a lot of novels......only a few of them are high.....and well......this is one of the highest ones iv'e given out. Well anyway this is my review so this will be based entirely on my opinion....my criteria for this review will be based on the "star chart" we rated. 1) Writing quality - 5 stars.....i rarely see novels that have really good grammar....and i mean RARELY, not to mention. I haven't seen any grammatical errors as of yet.(because you fix your chapters? Proofread?) Which i think is pretty nice, since most authors would rather just give the raw chapter, filled with grammatical errors. 2) Stability of updating - if i'm being honest, im actually inclined to just give this a 5 stars instead of 4....but like iv'e said to every other novel that iv'e given out a review on......there are authors out there who WILL get there chapter out no matter the circumstance so this would be unfair for them. 3) story development - I'm really excited for this kind of novels where the mc is forced to face "reality" with the hardships they go through themselves and not their pokemon. It makes it interactive? Relatable? Interesting? 4) character design - its really nice to see this kind of novel where the mc doesn't develop from having pokemon by his side. But an MC that goes through the hardship of "reality" that is pokemon. (I'll leave it at that because i really think that the way the mc is "created" here is genius and i have no small amount of words to describe it) 5) world background - if im being honest.......your probably the third author whom ive read a pokemon novel, that described the world so......accurately.....every action he makes, his environment.....the small details....though they seem insignificant to most......this is what makes me appreciate novels like this. (I'm a firm believer of "if you cant do the small things right then how can you move on to make the bigger things is life") Thanks for a novel to be kept in my library👍

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