Review Detail of Xincerely in Wild Young Miss: Mister, Let's Kiss!

Great summary so far~ It really draws in the readers and (honestly, a little bit relatable LOL). Your descriptions for things are on-point and the writing is really good! There’s not a lot of grammar errors, but there’s a bit of excessive run-on sentences? Nothing too much though. For example, some sentences have more than two fragments and is the length of a small paragraph. Maybe a rule of thumb, just to keep in mind, that when the sentence seems like it has 4-5 lines, try splitting it into two sentences so that it’s easier to read and has more clarity? But aside from that, the plot is interesting and the dialogue flows pretty smoothly~ I really dig the strong female lead vibe from Zoey! Love the idea of her being a CEO as well, so she’s on-par with the male lead ;D