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CocoaButter
CocoaButterLv114yr
2020-05-04 16:49

I don't like how passive MC character is and the hospital staff act like they're in high school. They gossip too much. The lack of maturity in this novel is not very appealing to read. It would have been bearable if the MC wasn't spineless

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sabada
sabadaLv13

As a male surgical nurse in a huge hospital in the US I can tell you that this vibe of everyone's maturity is on a high school level when there isn't an emergency is 100% realistic. Hence why **** takes 4 plus hours to get a basic treatment at hospitals....also not just a US vibe I've done volunteer work with some docs in South American/African countries its the same maturity level. TBH doctors tend to have more spine than this MC though I agree with you there.

JakeRay
JakeRayLv5

Thanks for you perspective! I'm surprised to hear that. But I still have to agree with CocoaButter that it not very appealing to read. Even if something somewhat resembles reality, it does not necessarily make it good writing.

sabada:As a male surgical nurse in a huge hospital in the US I can tell you that this vibe of everyone's maturity is on a high school level when there isn't an emergency is 100% realistic. Hence why **** takes 4 plus hours to get a basic treatment at hospitals....also not just a US vibe I've done volunteer work with some docs in South American/African countries its the same maturity level. TBH doctors tend to have more spine than this MC though I agree with you there.
sabada
sabadaLv13

100% agree there, I’m hoping whenever it gets picked up things change

JakeRay:Thanks for you perspective! I'm surprised to hear that. But I still have to agree with CocoaButter that it not very appealing to read. Even if something somewhat resembles reality, it does not necessarily make it good writing.
KageMugen
KageMugenLv14

MC spineless hmmm... so if you can't explain where you got your sudden rise in ability you start antagonizing your superiors in the first week you got it... I think it is much more believable for him to lay low and slowly rise...

Seide
SeideLv5

Swear i'm not stalking. Came on to check this out and saw you on here. lol

KageMugen:MC spineless hmmm... so if you can't explain where you got your sudden rise in ability you start antagonizing your superiors in the first week you got it... I think it is much more believable for him to lay low and slowly rise...
chocomug
chocomugLv4

I work in a large office where the average age is 50, and they all act like high schoolers.

Supreme_Devil
Supreme_DevilLv4

You know that what an actual stalker will say would mach with what you are saying right now on every level ...right?

Seide:Swear i'm not stalking. Came on to check this out and saw you on here. lol
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