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BeingAFakeGoddess
BeingAFakeGoddessLv54yr
2020-05-27 15:12

This story was sort of good, even with the typical selfish FL who’s says “oh you sacrificed your life for me so in the next reincarnation I will definitely love you and bear your kids, because apparently I made you suffer all those years that I hated you” And that I can overlook to a certain degree. But then you add this ‘magical cat’ with this ‘medical system’ from this destroyed planet billions of light years away just ruining the whole thing. It’s simply to much, it’s sorta okay that she’s selfish and, it’s completely okay that there’s reincarnation but don’t go pulling some Sailor Moon ****, in a world where it doesn’t fit. You can have them all separately, (reincarnation, transmigration, system, or pet from another world etc.) Or you can combine them but do it in away that fits the world/story and not just thrown in there to have a plot or because it seemed like a good idea. And that is my conclusion from what seems to be a good story at first, to some plot for a very very cheap movie, and of course others are free to have a different opinion.

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Aneettanu
AneettanuLv5

Absolutely right....this is exactly my thought.....I loved the story first very much....but the author ruined it by adding the system....it would have been perfect if it is a normal love story between the ml and FL ....but now I'm really disappointed...bcz I thought this is such a good story and expected better....☹️

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Elissiaro
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32 chapters in I had to stop reading. I just hate the Main Character so freaking much. She is SO weak. Cant speak, cant stand up for herself or the husband she suddenly loves now. Ok so. She HATED him. And was only married cause he convinced her parents to force her into it. She runs the **** away for 7 years. Story/prologue begins, shes hiding out in a remote mountain village as like the only doctor or something. Travelling somewhere during a storm with some soldiers, landslide, surprise! Stalker husband Followed her and has been creeping on her the whole time, except he saves her from the landslide and dies. She reads his will, it says he loved her n ****. Whoop she now loves him too. And the dies of heartbreak or whatever and wakes up in the past after he just forced that marriage on her. Que family dinner with the inlaws. And she sits there. For FOUR chapters being berated by her mil fil and sil cause sil found out she applied to the wrong medicine university ir something. Meanwhile husband, whos at least a nice stalker, tries to defend her and she just there. As useful as a cauliflower. Fast forward. They visit her parents, whom she, quite understandably, distanced herself from in the past after they completely ruined her life. Now she forgives them. They were right all along. Hes the perfect man. And never mind that he apparently never even bothered to tell her he liked her. (Did i forget to mention that? Apparently he went completely behind her back on the whole marriage thing and she though he didnt want it either. ) Anyway, they were right. She was wrong. She shouldve just settled into the life they forced on her and stepford smiles her way 2 happiness. Never mind the fact that she was literally unhappy enough to run away for 7 years never talking to him or her family or her friends presumably. No she was in the wrong the whole time. Is pretty much literally what she was thinking us she prepared to meet her parents and I don't like it. So I stopped reading. And the thing is , I think I would have liked the story about her past. I could have been on her side, you know, rebelling against her ****ty parents, to escape a forced marriage. And and then eventually instead of a stupid mudslide killing him and her reincarnating, he could have used his words, had a conversation, maybe gone on a date, and they could have fixed their marriage that way without her becoming a weak, spineless little doormat.

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