Electric Sage mode = Deus Ex Machina hacks on! A bit disappointed that no radiation or "hulk" sage mode was achieved, dude got his sage mode from normal lighting and science, barely using stuff from the narutoverse science and more our science, I expected the mc to try to make a serum or use some type of radiation. I mainly say that because on the narutoverse there is the Star chakra, that's basically ninjas using Plutonium and Uranium to generate chakra, since they were all dying of cancer, it became a "forbidden technique" with no clear explanation of why they were getting cancer, not to mention that the ninjas don't even know what radiation is! They call it "Mysterious Peacock Method" For Gods sake! Pretty cool what you did with the Summoning beast's lore, on cannon the toads did make some type of "sealing healing paper thing" that haguromo slaps on his brother after killing him to resurrect him, that "thing" is supposed to be an "Ancient" treasure of the toads, the more I read your fic, the more I start to believe that the toads manipulated haguromo into killing his mother instead of trying to heal her unstable mental state.
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