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amaturewriterLv44yr
2020-01-30 02:03

Read everything.....this author is DOPE,.....well written story....long...long..chps...legible and well structured...... BUT.....I think this is stupid why? Personally I believe that any crossover with Dragon ball is stupid cause they are the only anime in which the weakest cannon forder of a supervillan can easily destroy a planet..think of it...gokus bro..was a wweak ****.....but that ****er could destroy a planet..point is compared to the top assholes in DB...all other fiction stories characters are weak....I mean beerus isnt even the strongest and that asshole easily destroyed a planet by just tapping...fucking tapping...zeno destroyed a reality by just doing it...the **** can the anti-moniter and darkside do against these assholes... BUT..this author is DOPE,.....well written story....long...long..chps...legible and well structured...

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CIiff_Hanger
CIiff_HangerLv11

Ahhh dont forget when Beerus yawned an an entire solar system was wiped lol.

CLOUD_A
CLOUD_ALv3

Ahem, darkside’s true forms existence in any mortal realm, will rip apart the fabric of reality. And your saying that he doesn’t stand a chance against Zeno?

amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

well...zeno just willed an exisitence away....make no mistake Darkside is OP, like **** you..unfair level OP...the reason why I said zeno is stronger is cause...well,,,zeno just willed...whilst dark side had to move...so in my mind...zeno is stronger....get what I mean

CLOUD_A:Ahem, darkside’s true forms existence in any mortal realm, will rip apart the fabric of reality. And your saying that he doesn’t stand a chance against Zeno?
CLOUD_A
CLOUD_ALv3

Darkside: *Exists* Universe: Aight l, I'ma head out.

amaturewriter:well...zeno just willed an exisitence away....make no mistake Darkside is OP, like **** you..unfair level OP...the reason why I said zeno is stronger is cause...well,,,zeno just willed...whilst dark side had to move...so in my mind...zeno is stronger....get what I mean
astral_dragneel
astral_dragneelLv4

Dark seid belong 5 dimension all just avatar You really fan boy dragonball universe Just dont know how strong dc and Marvel universe

amaturewriter:well...zeno just willed an exisitence away....make no mistake Darkside is OP, like **** you..unfair level OP...the reason why I said zeno is stronger is cause...well,,,zeno just willed...whilst dark side had to move...so in my mind...zeno is stronger....get what I mean
astral_dragneel
astral_dragneelLv4

Dark seid belong 5 dimension all just avatar You really fan boy dragonball universe Just dont know how strong dc and Marvel universe

amaturewriter:well...zeno just willed an exisitence away....make no mistake Darkside is OP, like **** you..unfair level OP...the reason why I said zeno is stronger is cause...well,,,zeno just willed...whilst dark side had to move...so in my mind...zeno is stronger....get what I mean
astral_dragneel
astral_dragneelLv4

Let me remind you that erase ability of zeno is not absolute it not work on stronger or same level Hakai perfect example of this. can destroy anything but not absolute when toppo use hakai on vegeta, vegeta destroy the hakai of toppo

amaturewriter:well...zeno just willed an exisitence away....make no mistake Darkside is OP, like **** you..unfair level OP...the reason why I said zeno is stronger is cause...well,,,zeno just willed...whilst dark side had to move...so in my mind...zeno is stronger....get what I mean
astral_dragneel
astral_dragneelLv4

Let me remind you that erase ability of zeno is not absolute it not work on stronger or same level Hakai perfect example of this. can destroy anything but not absolute when toppo use hakai on vegeta, vegeta destroy the hakai of toppo

amaturewriter:well...zeno just willed an exisitence away....make no mistake Darkside is OP, like **** you..unfair level OP...the reason why I said zeno is stronger is cause...well,,,zeno just willed...whilst dark side had to move...so in my mind...zeno is stronger....get what I mean
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

idiot...I am not a DBZ a fan,,,,make no mistake, its cool for sure but its stupid for me.. also never claimed dark side was weak..just said that he wasnt on zenos level....darkside has his mutant powers, his equation and the boxes,,,,and even without that **** darkside is a god, top tier [I even said it before],,, what I said was that zeno just has his own power, no extra ****,,,,and unlike darkside,,he just willed an existence away,,,an existence, not a multiverse, a universe BUT an existence,,,,and for that reason alone he is stronger...I explained it even you just talk senseless ****.......like hell, read my first sentence about darkside..... Also zenos power isnt erasure...it Nonexistence, something well beyond darksides capabilities....Nonexistence is one of the reasons why I think DBZ is stupid...that power is unimaginable You really fan boy of dc and Marvel universe Just dont know how strong dragonball universe

astral_dragneel:Dark seid belong 5 dimension all just avatar You really fan boy dragonball universe Just dont know how strong dc and Marvel universe
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

the power is called Nonexistence..look it up.....before acting like a wise ass get ur facts straight dude

astral_dragneel:Let me remind you that erase ability of zeno is not absolute it not work on stronger or same level Hakai perfect example of this. can destroy anything but not absolute when toppo use hakai on vegeta, vegeta destroy the hakai of toppo
astral_dragneel
astral_dragneelLv4

Dragon ball universe their powr level didnt reach multiverse level saying that same lavel dc or marvel

amaturewriter:idiot...I am not a DBZ a fan,,,,make no mistake, its cool for sure but its stupid for me.. also never claimed dark side was weak..just said that he wasnt on zenos level....darkside has his mutant powers, his equation and the boxes,,,,and even without that **** darkside is a god, top tier [I even said it before],,, what I said was that zeno just has his own power, no extra ****,,,,and unlike darkside,,he just willed an existence away,,,an existence, not a multiverse, a universe BUT an existence,,,,and for that reason alone he is stronger...I explained it even you just talk senseless ****.......like hell, read my first sentence about darkside..... Also zenos power isnt erasure...it Nonexistence, something well beyond darksides capabilities....Nonexistence is one of the reasons why I think DBZ is stupid...that power is unimaginable You really fan boy of dc and Marvel universe Just dont know how strong dragonball universe
astral_dragneel
astral_dragneelLv4

There no characters dragon ball universe can destroy infinite universe even zeno just destroying timeline need alot of minutes before erasing it Dc or marvel this thing easy doing how many issue comics multi-universe have been destroy

amaturewriter:idiot...I am not a DBZ a fan,,,,make no mistake, its cool for sure but its stupid for me.. also never claimed dark side was weak..just said that he wasnt on zenos level....darkside has his mutant powers, his equation and the boxes,,,,and even without that **** darkside is a god, top tier [I even said it before],,, what I said was that zeno just has his own power, no extra ****,,,,and unlike darkside,,he just willed an existence away,,,an existence, not a multiverse, a universe BUT an existence,,,,and for that reason alone he is stronger...I explained it even you just talk senseless ****.......like hell, read my first sentence about darkside..... Also zenos power isnt erasure...it Nonexistence, something well beyond darksides capabilities....Nonexistence is one of the reasons why I think DBZ is stupid...that power is unimaginable You really fan boy of dc and Marvel universe Just dont know how strong dragonball universe
astral_dragneel
astral_dragneelLv4

There no characters dragon ball universe can destroy infinite universe even zeno just destroying timeline need alot of minutes before erasing it Dc or marvel this thing easy doing how many issue comics multi-universe have been destroy

amaturewriter:idiot...I am not a DBZ a fan,,,,make no mistake, its cool for sure but its stupid for me.. also never claimed dark side was weak..just said that he wasnt on zenos level....darkside has his mutant powers, his equation and the boxes,,,,and even without that **** darkside is a god, top tier [I even said it before],,, what I said was that zeno just has his own power, no extra ****,,,,and unlike darkside,,he just willed an existence away,,,an existence, not a multiverse, a universe BUT an existence,,,,and for that reason alone he is stronger...I explained it even you just talk senseless ****.......like hell, read my first sentence about darkside..... Also zenos power isnt erasure...it Nonexistence, something well beyond darksides capabilities....Nonexistence is one of the reasons why I think DBZ is stupid...that power is unimaginable You really fan boy of dc and Marvel universe Just dont know how strong dragonball universe
astral_dragneel
astral_dragneelLv4

Grandpriest already say power zeno erasing. superdragon ball can bring back nonexisting? Zeno power non existing then even super dragon ball cannot revive all zeno been erase

amaturewriter:idiot...I am not a DBZ a fan,,,,make no mistake, its cool for sure but its stupid for me.. also never claimed dark side was weak..just said that he wasnt on zenos level....darkside has his mutant powers, his equation and the boxes,,,,and even without that **** darkside is a god, top tier [I even said it before],,, what I said was that zeno just has his own power, no extra ****,,,,and unlike darkside,,he just willed an existence away,,,an existence, not a multiverse, a universe BUT an existence,,,,and for that reason alone he is stronger...I explained it even you just talk senseless ****.......like hell, read my first sentence about darkside..... Also zenos power isnt erasure...it Nonexistence, something well beyond darksides capabilities....Nonexistence is one of the reasons why I think DBZ is stupid...that power is unimaginable You really fan boy of dc and Marvel universe Just dont know how strong dragonball universe
astral_dragneel
astral_dragneelLv4

Your just dont know true level power dc and marvel basing on movie or cartoon show been super nerf. Zeno exist multiply version. Dark seid only 1 exist. This big difference between zeno and dark seid you could already see who is higher being

amaturewriter:idiot...I am not a DBZ a fan,,,,make no mistake, its cool for sure but its stupid for me.. also never claimed dark side was weak..just said that he wasnt on zenos level....darkside has his mutant powers, his equation and the boxes,,,,and even without that **** darkside is a god, top tier [I even said it before],,, what I said was that zeno just has his own power, no extra ****,,,,and unlike darkside,,he just willed an existence away,,,an existence, not a multiverse, a universe BUT an existence,,,,and for that reason alone he is stronger...I explained it even you just talk senseless ****.......like hell, read my first sentence about darkside..... Also zenos power isnt erasure...it Nonexistence, something well beyond darksides capabilities....Nonexistence is one of the reasons why I think DBZ is stupid...that power is unimaginable You really fan boy of dc and Marvel universe Just dont know how strong dragonball universe
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

you just ignore half the **** I said....pointless talking with a fanboy

astral_dragneel:Your just dont know true level power dc and marvel basing on movie or cartoon show been super nerf. Zeno exist multiply version. Dark seid only 1 exist. This big difference between zeno and dark seid you could already see who is higher being
Magna_Prime
Magna_PrimeLv2

My dude just from the title I am already a fan of your works, but im going to stop you right there if you make dc and marvel stronger than dragonball z.

astral_dragneel:Your just dont know true level power dc and marvel basing on movie or cartoon show been super nerf. Zeno exist multiply version. Dark seid only 1 exist. This big difference between zeno and dark seid you could already see who is higher being
astral_dragneel
astral_dragneelLv4

Give me a name in dragon ball universe can destroy multi-universal or seriously damage a multiverse.

Magna_Prime:My dude just from the title I am already a fan of your works, but im going to stop you right there if you make dc and marvel stronger than dragonball z.
astral_dragneel
astral_dragneelLv4

Give me a name in dragon ball universe can destroy multi-universal or seriously damage a multiverse.

Magna_Prime:My dude just from the title I am already a fan of your works, but im going to stop you right there if you make dc and marvel stronger than dragonball z.
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