This was really fun to read, action packed and fast paced. The characters have great depth, and the dialogue is hilarious at the best of times. Writing wise I was pleasantly surprised to see the author's mastery of grammar improve. In the beginning there were a few grammar issues but nothing major, and towards the end I honestly couldn't find any. (I never look at punctuation since mine sucks... ^_^' ) Overall I enjoyed reading this due to the comedy and the plot :)
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