Review Detail of RisingDoom in Servants With a Modern Weapon

Could you tell me how can I make the story has more in depth explanation? Thanks :)

A good example of the story not having an in-depth explanation is about the situation of the MC's parents. It was only stated that they are servants of a duke and nothing more, I don't even know the name of the MC's father and it was only chapter 4 or 5 that I got to MC's mother name is Elena(please correct me if I'm mistaken) ; if not for the MC calling her mother during a kitchen scene I wouldn't have known. So, start explaining somethings about people, places, and events. It doesn't need a long explanation, as long as you point out the important details, that should do the trick.

I apologize if I disappoint you. Thanks for your suggestion. Hope your story "Merc System" gets better in the future. I apologize if there are words that displease you.

Well... you didn't displease me, so no need to apologize. This review of mine is for you to know your flaws in writing this novel of yours. But don't take it the hard way just take your time and slowly adjust your flaws.

Ok, thanks.

The author deleted my review twice! You cant silence me mate. Mc is a slave to the girl and duke even though he is stronger than them, thats right! even though mc is stronger he chooses to be a servant.View

I will leave that here ^^^.

Knights are usually stronger than their lords as the are supposed to protect them so I don't see a problem with your servant being stronger than you unless the don't trust his loyalty