Honestly, I'm not going to say the stars as I normally do, because I mostly consider it a waste of time. I will just give the information without further ado.
First of all, the character is reborn, that is not a problem, but for some reason he is the kind of weird that, without knowing the world he is in, starts to meditate, finding an energy in him and, by destiny. and without anything else, it says that it is Chakra from the world of naruto. The most common is that he thinks that he is Ki or Chi, but there is him.
The other thing is: The character has a relentless memory, it seems that he can remember the entire naruto series, because 9 years after he was born, it was said that he could already use X amount of jutsus that I do not remember, which does not make much sense even with photographic memory, because the techniques not only require hand stamps, but also move the chakra through the chakra circulatory system. I mean, they literally don't show why the specific chakra circulatory system needs to go through, and how much chakra needs to go through, along with the hand seals, to form the jutsu. He literally learns them out of nowhere.
The protagonist can defeat a Kage, when he obviously does not have the ninja training to move his body, or do the basics to move properly. I mean, the guy shouldn't even put people into Genjutsu, because he's supposed to infuse them with his Chakra, so that they go through the person's Chakra and I got to where the Chakra travels in the brain, the place where he will manipulate the Chakra to affect the brain.
There are other things, but honestly there are many and I have already written too much. In short, it is not good, because even the narration, the story and the rest is not.
Honestly, I like the author, or rather the Green Lantern Story, because for someone who has not seen many Marvel comics, seeing this type of fanfic is pleasant. (Literally, because even if it's copied and pasted from the comic, it's still good for me because I haven't seen it. Lol).
