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Item: The Intelligent Potter
Rating: 4.4

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striker45Lv135yrstriker45

The story is quiet interesting and I love logical part of the fic it adds what was not there in og while its good and story si far has far more entertaining but what it lacks is character development and the interaction between MC and others he needs personality

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PxFive作者PxFive

Glad you're enjoying. The character relationships get explored a little more in the later chapters but you are right that they are not as much of a focus as they were in canon.

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