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LIKEWell...as I said concept was interesting...but like you know the hook...which in your case is MC is Voldi...is interesting..but about him being an evil douche ..you could change it, maybe make him nice? Romance? NOslash,pls..... Time Travel....the black sister's romance? Fluff? girl's are NOT slut's....Happy..or atleast you know ..not angst s or tragic story...just...plus chp's maybe over 1500 suggesting...anyway update more chp's...your novel is interesting!!!! I'll change rating..you can delete it..but if possible take some of my suggestion's....as I said interesting concept....GOOD SHOW :)
but without voldy there would be no harry potter it would just be some guy becoming stronger with no villian or anything interesting
amaturewriter:Well...as I said concept was interesting...but like you know the hook...which in your case is MC is Voldi...is interesting..but about him being an evil douche ..you could change it, maybe make him nice? Romance? NOslash,pls..... Time Travel....the black sister's romance? Fluff? girl's are NOT slut's....Happy..or atleast you know ..not angst s or tragic story...just...plus chp's maybe over 1500 suggesting...anyway update more chp's...your novel is interesting!!!! I'll change rating..you can delete it..but if possible take some of my suggestion's....as I said interesting concept....GOOD SHOW :)