Item: Haunted System: Path to a Superstar
Rating: 3.6

gamly33Lv55yr

2019-08-15 18:43

this is interesting look at this type of story. up to now the main character has been consistent a bit bumbling but that is a realistic look at how someone might be if they found themselves in this story's plot however there are bit's that put me off this story one. The MC seems he is going to make the same mistake many times before he learns his lesson two. the passe is a bit weird for a character's here and there. three. I have seen bit that suggest that the Dao of filler will be in heavy use in this story. but at the end of the day. it is a good story you just need to binge on it a bit. 👍

Haunted System: Path to a Superstar

Eslyna

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34 Chs

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EslynaAuthor

mind telling me what mistake he seems he will repeat?

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gamly33Lv5

did he have or try to find any salt or gone to see a priest or holy man of any type. he know sprites can play with ones mind has he tried memory games or training. these are just off the top of my head but good story so far 👍👍

Eslyna:mind telling me what mistake he seems he will repeat?

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