Review Detail of GrimTheCat in I was Born the Unloved Twin

The character development and soft world building is great. This has a slow moving plot and is mostly a slice of life. There are fluffy wholesome chapters and dark action packed chapters. The characters are rich and mostly multidimensional, with strengths and faults, no Mary Sue's here. The problems that the characters face aren't always just about good versus evil, but the daily struggles of life. The main character is battling memories, which both help and harm her. Can she learn to trust the people around her? Can she gain confidence in her reality? Can she succeed in not only surviving but also in thriving? We shall hopefully see. This story is an unpolished gem, that could benefit from an editor clarifying scenes and catching grammatical error. However if you are like me, use to reading novels online, then you'll be able to see the shine of this novel regardless if the author spells a word wrong, or confuses you when a scene or POV changes. I recommend this story!