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Ashwatthama
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Story is nice. But i have 1 q. [ well my English is not very good so pls. ignore any grammar or any other kind of mistake. ] Q >> what is the guarantee that mc crew can't betray him or something. I mean if i was at his place then i would love to give them power with some sort of limitations or more like safety, like they will become 100% loyal or something. I mean guys like mihawk won't betray him but still, this is just based on anime story, anime and real world should have vast difference to make it more fun. well story is nice but you have ignored many few things which could have made this story even better or more like a real story like u can find on uukanshu or some other site ( style wise ). Thank u for this novel . I still liked it a little. Hope if u will write any new novel in future then u will keep some pts. in mind. -------------------------- So if any one like to read a novel seriously or more like by engrossing them in it like they are the mc so this is not for you. But if you like to read a novel by 3rd person POV then u will find that this novel is still a rare gem. At least among other fanfic available in so many sites, this one is better. --------------------------------- But yes pls ans. my question, if u can.

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Ashwatthama
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seriously man, now on webnovel we can't even edit our comment...lol