Item: When paying for an expansion I became a boss monster in my favorite game.
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douggieturnerLv45yr

2019-08-09 08:06

1 star for practically copying overgeared synopsis. Havent read it yet, seems like an interesting idea, but if you can't even come up with your own synopsis, it doesn't bode well for your story

When paying for an expansion I became a boss monster in my favorite game.

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