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2018-12-29 02:58

I'm kinda hooked from your story, I wish someone read it too because it's too good. I don't care even if some people didn't like this but it's different from me the words that you used are very well understandable and I suggest you to think some ways for the MC and make it more challenging.

Swords of the Ancient

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It is shameful of me to rate myself 5 stars overall I know that the format of my novel is quite disturbing and the grammar are also ridiculous but I wish you enjoy it. If there's something wrong and you had an ideas that came out from your mind feel free to tell it. With your ideas I could grow more. Thank you for your time reading it :)

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