I hope some time soon you’ll find someone to help you with the grammar in your story-boarding. It’d be silly of me to offer any kind of service, because you’d undoubtedly never accept, but I’m sure there’s several people like me who would do it for free or bare minimum. I enjoy the story and would like for it to read a bit better. I occasionally get snagged on a missing or misspelled word, or an improper phrasing. HOWEVER! I do in fact really enjoy the story and hope you continue to post it for a long time. As of now it’s the sole reason I still use this application Good luck and be well, Tachyon.
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