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synaesthesia
synaesthesiaLv55yrsynaesthesia

The vocabulary and grammar is worse than a primary schoolers, the synopsis alone has more than 30 grammatical errors.. how is it possible to read this..

+18 - Harem Palace Sect's System

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Kyrior
KyriorLv5Kyrior

Don't read it and don't give it a bad reviews then

Kyrior
KyriorLv5Kyrior

"how is it possible to read this"that mean you cant read it right. so dont give it a bad reviews if you don't know anything about it

Afida15
Afida15Lv5Afida15

We are not in english class here and the author him self has admit it that he have a bad grammar, so if you can't read it you don't have to blame the author but blame your perfection in english that make you can't read it and make you more stupid than primary schoolers.

8Psycho
8PsychoLv58Psycho

Reviews exist for a reason kids, if something is bad it must be pointed out.

Idunnopoetry
IdunnopoetryLv5Idunnopoetry

You are saying that since the author has admitted it, he can now read and that it isn't the author's fault for his story being filled with grammar mistakes.

Afida15:We are not in english class here and the author him self has admit it that he have a bad grammar, so if you can't read it you don't have to blame the author but blame your perfection in english that make you can't read it and make you more stupid than primary schoolers.
ShaRinGan
ShaRinGanLv10ShaRinGan

Wth.. Use ur common sense.. Simple as that..

huvftvv
huvftvvLv5huvftvv

Seriously

LtBeefy
LtBeefyLv15LtBeefy

The grammar is truly bad. If it was an occasional thing fine, but it's very consistent. If author knows he is bad at grammar as I bet ya english isnt his first language. He should look for an editor to help out. Plenty of people out there who might be willing to help out for free.

Afida15:We are not in english class here and the author him self has admit it that he have a bad grammar, so if you can't read it you don't have to blame the author but blame your perfection in english that make you can't read it and make you more stupid than primary schoolers.
MacBentley
MacBentleyLv5MacBentley

Yeah, if he admits that his grammar is bad he should do something to improve his english. Though don't really complain much, but this is just too abd tbh... he should improve his english or find an editor if he truly cares about his readers. Also, reviews exist for a reason kids... we are poiting out the mistakes of the author so that he can improve himself. How can he improve himslef if no one gives negative reviews. he will just think we are fine with his current grammar and not improve it...

Ouhbaba
OuhbabaLv6Ouhbaba

I think you don't understand why reviews exist haha

Kyrior:Don't read it and don't give it a bad reviews then
DonHit
DonHitLv6DonHit

Hahahahaga

Kyrior:"how is it possible to read this"that mean you cant read it right. so dont give it a bad reviews if you don't know anything about it
DonHit
DonHitLv6DonHit

Share mulang 😂😂

8Psycho:Reviews exist for a reason kids, if something is bad it must be pointed out.
MiLfL0VeR
MiLfL0VeRLv12MiLfL0VeR

Lol editors needed to be paid and he does not have that cash ao if you want you can apply

LtBeefy:The grammar is truly bad. If it was an occasional thing fine, but it's very consistent. If author knows he is bad at grammar as I bet ya english isnt his first language. He should look for an editor to help out. Plenty of people out there who might be willing to help out for free.
MiLfL0VeR
MiLfL0VeRLv12MiLfL0VeR

Lol editors needed to be paid and he does not have that cash ao if you want you can apply

LtBeefy:The grammar is truly bad. If it was an occasional thing fine, but it's very consistent. If author knows he is bad at grammar as I bet ya english isnt his first language. He should look for an editor to help out. Plenty of people out there who might be willing to help out for free.
LtBeefy
LtBeefyLv15LtBeefy

Lot of editors in this field dont. In translation and self publish can find people to help for free. Especially for this novel wouldn't be hard to find someone with a better grasp of the English language.

MiLfL0VeR:Lol editors needed to be paid and he does not have that cash ao if you want you can apply
LurKing
LurKingLv5LurKing

It is possible as long as you can read.

LurKing
LurKingLv5LurKing

It is possible as long as you can read.

squidsquish
squidsquishLv5squidsquish

This is definitely the most retarded comment on this site I have found yet.

Afida15:We are not in english class here and the author him self has admit it that he have a bad grammar, so if you can't read it you don't have to blame the author but blame your perfection in english that make you can't read it and make you more stupid than primary schoolers.
Kulingile
KulingileLv5Kulingile

It is possible to read but it’s only that, possible. I don’t want something that is possible to read, I want something that is nice to read, a novel in wich I don’t ask myself at every phrase: « what does he means? » and don’t read the chapter while correcting his horrible mistakes.

LurKing:It is possible as long as you can read.
Hasy547
Hasy547Lv2Hasy547

Complete retard. So you only want reviews that you agree with? This Fan-Fiction is garbage, like all of them. Go back to jacking off to your mommy.

Kyrior:Don't read it and don't give it a bad reviews then