A great fanfic, i really found MC reincarnated as side character and have real personality(not beta), i has good interaction between character and unique synergy between chat group. The great think i found is constantly changing places, unlike many fanfic (specially multiverse one) that stay on one dimension or arc for too long sometimes it can be +100 chapter can make readers bored and need something new or change, that is great point for me. The downside is not realy a bad thing but a little confusing for me. Early chapter i think MC is more experimenting than pervert playboy because there not mentioning anything about sex(he even denied it in earlier part of fanfic), and then after some chapter i found he have sex with his aunt and from that he starting becoming full fledge playboy. Sometimes he feel so hypocrite like don't want harem and complaining about not thinking about woman feeling about making harem but he in the first place try to f*ck woman if he have change saying he still young and playing a round isn't it little too hypocrite. It good to have constant changing in story so it feel fresh, but i think it doesn't apply to character personality like ,what is he like? Why he do that? Why he change? Why he denied his own doing? Why he so conflicted about? Something like that is important to decided form earlier and if you want to create a change show why? How? He change his mind don't just change it suddenly.
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