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AdrianVeidt
AdrianVeidtLv116yr
2018-10-06 02:25

Good backstory author san, by the way, will mc be evil/battle maniac/indifferent? Hope mc and train his own troop and conquer the universe,

Ultimate Saiyan God

glo_antttt
4.2
6 Chs

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glo_antttt
glo_antttt作者

Neither think of the actual sane devil path cultivators from CN novels, Linley from warlock of the magus era. Hint- ”He didn't believe in good or evil” from the chapter his only aim is the pursuit of absolute strength!

6yr
AdrianVeidt
AdrianVeidtLv11

Omg author san.... Chappy pleaseee this is goood😁😁😁😁😁

6yr
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FujiCigarette
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Writing quality 4.5/5 - the writing is good but not perfect, youll find small mistakes if you read slowly, but in a glance they are easily ignored Stability of updates 3/5 - that lower score is there because as of this review there are only 3 chapters Story Development 3/5 - has a good premise, mcs background story is a little bit over the top Character Design 4/5 - for a fanfic getting a 3 in char design is a high score but because of the OC here being the main point in all 3 chapters he carries the story quite well World Background 5/5 - its a Dragonball world that incorporates some canon facts with Fan made speculations that makes sense sooo it has great WB all in all this has the potential, hope the author keeps writing more, while it may not be the type of novel that i will craze about, i will still read this too pass the time

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synncrytech3
synncrytech3Lv5

Hey! , why are you reading this...scroll up and read the novel, idiot! - OH YEAH! REEeeEeEeeeEEEeeEeeEeeeeEEEEeeeEEeEeeEEEeEeeEEEEEEEEEeeeeEEEeEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEeeeeeEEEEeeEeEEeEeEEEEEEEeeeeeeeEEE

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Thefirst12
Thefirst12Lv14

I hope you would continue this novel because I like those types and people never continue them. I WILL give you stones! Ooh i forgot to say I read your past novel and I really enjoyed it very much so don't let me down.

6yr
Divine_Might
Divine_MightLv5

It has good start and potential to it Hopefully i think author will continue

6yr
FujiCigarette
FujiCigaretteLv5

update review........ stability of updates 1star.... two weeks no updates....everything else are rated the same as my first review 1star in stability of updates basically means its one of those sleeper fics that takes a long time to update... hope this changes in the future

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RoiRed
RoiRedLv13

Really good, I look forward to the continuation! He falls into my library without hesitation 140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...

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Mackalthor
MackalthorLv14

Awesome story thus far, looking forward to more chapters. Can definetly see the potential of the story. Only 2 chaps out now but happy overall.

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Plutonium
PlutoniumLv6

I love the way you made your Mc, Neither a Hypocrite, nor a Demon. If you stay out of his path, he won’t give a damn about you. I really hope you don’t drop this Novel love many other. Only warlock of Magus World is the only Novel with the same type of Mc and is completed.

6yr
Kay619
Kay619Lv3

Writing quality is passable, but could be improved. A little "." and "," could make the sentences better. Some words/phrases are repeated or redundant and must have escaped the author's notice. Updates are uncertain for now. Still too early to decide if its stable, or if its once in a week. Story development is interesting so far. Pacing is ok. As for character design, MC is ok. Interesting backstory. Lacks background on why MC is a killer and not an assassin. Plot is good. I see that author took a little AI chip from Leylin. :) Overall, quite a good start for this novel. Definitely a different league from author's previous work. Kudos and well done for improving.

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