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2020-06-01 04:48

The first few chapters are rather depressing and sorrowful. I suppose it's a "sad start" type of novel in which the female lead gradually grows to become stronger and more confident overtime. Grammar and vocab is unbelievably perfect. I couldn't spot a single mistake. The editing skills are really professional.

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