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Lawlyeth
LawlyethLv146yr
2018-09-26 01:15

This novel is written and looks like a lot of other novels on royalroadls (dungeon kinds and re:smthing ) that are quickly dropped (yeah) The story is a bit too childish ( the thief , the rambling of the MCs and the villagers) and the characters are not well enough introduced (as of today I don't give a f*ck to any of them except the thief) The uploading pace is a bit low to nowadays novels It's stll good and would like to continue to read it as long as possible until you decide to drop it. 97/100 IGN

Adventures With a Reincarnated Bush

Untolddead
4.4
95 Chs

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Untolddead
UntolddeadAuthor

Thanks for giving me a good review even though you have critiques. Sorry that my characters ramble and are childish :(. I have though about going back and adding more descriptions to the story. I'm definitely more of a dialogue writer. The childishness comes a lot from the fact that I was planning on writing a short comedy originally. However as people started reading and I came up with a few ideas for a more long term story it became a bit more serious. But I've been afraid that if I go too serious and straight I might disappoint people who like the comedy. So I've been trying to mix it together. I always feel bad about the upload rate. I can't say sorry enough. Time just seems to slip by... I don't really have any good excuses. I'm glad you enjoy it to some extent! I have no plans of dropping this. I will keep writing as long as people are still reading and enjoying. or until the end.

6yr
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MilordInk
MilordInkLv13

That right there is the kind of attitude that will make this book grow. I'm glad you're open to these kinds of good criticism. Don't be afraid to make the story a little bit serious at times because too much comedy, and less event building can make the plot feel rushed at times. Good comedy can make a situation turn from boring into exciting among other things Well, I'll have to read your story to give better advice so expect me in the reviews sometime soon.

Untolddead:Thanks for giving me a good review even though you have critiques. Sorry that my characters ramble and are childish :(. I have though about going back and adding more descriptions to the story. I'm definitely more of a dialogue writer. The childishness comes a lot from the fact that I was planning on writing a short comedy originally. However as people started reading and I came up with a few ideas for a more long term story it became a bit more serious. But I've been afraid that if I go too serious and straight I might disappoint people who like the comedy. So I've been trying to mix it together. I always feel bad about the upload rate. I can't say sorry enough. Time just seems to slip by... I don't really have any good excuses. I'm glad you enjoy it to some extent! I have no plans of dropping this. I will keep writing as long as people are still reading and enjoying. or until the end.
5yr
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Untolddead
UntolddeadAuthor

Thanks I hope you enjoy

MilordInk:That right there is the kind of attitude that will make this book grow. I'm glad you're open to these kinds of good criticism. Don't be afraid to make the story a little bit serious at times because too much comedy, and less event building can make the plot feel rushed at times. Good comedy can make a situation turn from boring into exciting among other things Well, I'll have to read your story to give better advice so expect me in the reviews sometime soon.
5yr
DaoistBlackSheep
DaoistBlackSheepLv6

I think as a character grows they become less silly, and ignorant. It's only natural that "kids" grow up.

5yr
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Different and refreshing compared to other reincarnation stories I've read . Grammar is decent and only needs slight tweaks , overall enjoyable .

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Ah, such a beautiful story. Ahem. Sorry, got caught up with my worshipping. In any case, the writing quality is pretty good, thanks to the editor. There are still a few places in which grammer needs to be checked over though(but this is natural. Humans can't make everything perfect). Stability of Updates...hmm...for the most part, the updates are coming really well, just a few times couldn't meet the deadline(haha, better than good ol'sloth me) Everything else is just perfect! The way characters never appear the way they do, the growth of the children, and of course, our MC. It was hilarious reading the interaction of a plant and the demonic bull. XDXD I think the world background is great, and it actually sounds realistic, not just some bullcrud stuff being thrown at you. I find it is extremely easy to be hooked. I swear, it sounds just like those best-selling books. here I'm gonna boast my insignificant boast. I PUT IN THE 100TH POWERSTONE. SO PROUD OF MYSELF :D:D:D:D:D And that's about it. time to go back in my worship mode~

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I truly love it. If there is word to define what I feel, I will say it's about freshness. This story reminds me about a RTW fanfiction about being reincarnated as rock and wielding magic, except this one actually have original framework so it has more materials to develop. The only concern that I have is the sentence structure, it might be some residual dialect of the author that makes me have some difficulties to get the nuance being implied. I also found some sentences/phrases that I believe can be shortened/rephrased and still retains its intent. The need of the editor is quite high for this work, nonetheless the story itself is amazing, it's a really great take on the way of plant's life. Do you know that, after reading this story, I did self reflection about our treatment over plant and animal... I will add this, you might add a chapter about cultivation jargon especially the power level, to clear some ideas

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love the new concept of being a plant. very refreshing also it would help if any of you guys can give me advice on novels like this were mc turns into an animal, insect or fish or plant. really (pretty much anything where mc can turn into something or reincarnated as something) Also MORE UPDATES

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Ha i am really enjoying this so far, because the character interaction is superb, especially between the "hill mates". I also really look forward to seeing how the "plant" and the surrounding characters progress. This story is so new and fresh and quite funny, please continue writing this.

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This is a very good story till now. ( Ch12 ) The language and grammar could use some work. Author - kun, i recommend that you read the book - 'high school grammar and comprehension by wren and martin' Keep up the good work.

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Like the book so far, and the concepts defedently unique. Good plot, not too boring. I love Joe the bull. Can anybody tell me how often this author updates?

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So far i really like it, it's different and that's good many stories are far too similar. There are some grammar mistakes here and there but it is still easy to read, and there are not huge useless explanations either, so i recommend this novel. I look forward to more.

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Untolddead
UntolddeadAuthor

I wasn't going to do a review because it feels like cheating but all the others writers say they did it so here I am. I was surprised by how many people were interest in this strange story I came up with to join the competition. I didn't even get it out in time too enter so I had written it off. Yet now it's way more popular then Iron Will Reaches the Heaven which was the story I wanted to write most. This gives me mixed feeling but I'm glad people are enjoying this. I literally have no plan and am just making it up as I go for this one. Please stick with me on this unusual adventure!

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WenHaoChen14
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I don't like this, but I do recommend it for anyone who also likes this kind of novel and this genre! :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)

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