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FrostMage
FrostMageLv56yr
2018-08-01 20:52

The story is awesome!!!!!!!But can you tell me the stability of the updates. Also i think you should change the name to kingdom building instead of cooking. Keep up the good work>_<

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Heavenly_Tiger
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First of all, it sucks that you didn't explain the world more, although yes you explained about the hiearchy system and thats it! You didn't even explain in detail if there is magic or simalr thing! There is a 'identification stone' and the first thing I thought I you would do is make MC learn about this kind of stuff better and the world he got in better but no you write many chapters with MC having s** like wtf dude the title is even culinary but the first thing you focused on is MC and his love interests being intimate not cooking not food and not searching for more information and the MC is an idiot - its okay to tell about business strategies and law and policies to the baron, his father but production of new products, the f*** you should just have the MC make a new company (although the territory is having a crisis roght now they are still a baron they must have savings and such also there is the thing called an investment), this will make the MC and his family prosper more, remeber that the territory is not entirely their own but the kingdom they are in.... If they have a family company they will not just make the family prosper but also the economy of the territory, it will become the specialty of the territory more visitors more people more money and more merchant will invest in the territory for potential and competition.... Also is it quite a norm for MC to check their status first or this MC is just a UNIQUE DUMBA** and the author H****!!! Im excited at first because there is a gourmet novel again for me to read but its just a SE* novel at most in the chapters until now BTW there is another novel using the same character name as this MC with the same type of novel which is gourmet (lol I don't know if this is gourmet because the first 21 chapters but cooking dishes is not even properly mentioned or it is nit ipmentioned even), hope you will improve and also I advise you that upyou get an editor if ever you pursue this nove!!!!!

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